Glad to see that the listing on the frontpage has been changed to reflect the actual content of the seminar, rather than the mis-leading and potentially fraudulent claims made in the original advert.
Just a couple of other things spring to mind:
1. you have added:
"If it is not clear, this seminar will ONLY be suitable for those that are already trading the Dow, or are seeking to make a start."
Why not incorporate this in the title somewhere?
It is sort of stuck away at the end of the pre-amble, so it is far from 'clear'.
2. Is this seminar offered anywhere else other than T2W? If so are they paying full price? Have they been informed that they can claim a 20% reduction simply by joining T2W?
If not, the 20% off for T2W members claim is false and against basic trading standards laws.
3. I have checked and re-checked my email offers from T2W, but I don't appear to have received my copy of the new advert, surely it is common practice for both the advertiser and the host medium to re-issue when such dramatic changes have been made?
Afterall, the advertiser should be seen to have a duty of care to those interested in attending, and the host has a duty of care to those to which it exposes the advert. Plus the advertiser is opening themselves up to criticism if someone who was duped into booking from the first advert doesn't get what they want ( perhaps they specifically signed up to learn about Marks trading systems for UK stocks, which now appears to have been dropped.
The cost shouldn't be a problem as you will be making so much from the seminar anyway.
4. That just leaves FSA. Now that you have come clean about the real content of the seminar you include the phrases "specific reference to Dow Trading that Martin has used for many years" and "a workable trading strategy" and "detailed look at Martin’s Dow strategy and theories".
You are now selling a specific system for trading a specific instrument to the general public - rather than either a privately invited audience (which you have to know beforehand), or for no charge ( but again a private audience).
I may well be wrong, but you need to check with FSA that you are not in contravention of their regulations, my understanding is that you are as the subject matter is specific rather than generic.